Poem - Gipsies Tent, Dudley

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Yeah, yeah I know, it's an Urbex forum. But bear with me.....

I was talking with a buddy a couple of days ago about derelict buildings in general and he sent me this poem. He used to be the licencee of a pub that was 'next door' to the Gipsies Tent and had dreams of saving it.

I had no idea about it's existence until I did a seach on here and found that a lot of you have visited it - so I thought I'd share it.

I loved it, I hope you do too:

The Gypsies Tent

Dark and foreboding,
the empty shell stands a stark reminder of better times.

Shattered and broken,
dirty windows no longer sparkle or reveal the life within.

Ripped and torn,
once pristine curtains billow from the flat above.

Torched and besmirched,
the roof bears testament only to an arsonist’s night out.

Mouldy and faded,
only the woodlice dine here now on jaded timber.

Smashed and destroyed,
vandals have ensured the piano has given up its last note.

Grey and untouched,
ashtrays still remain with their Woodbines and Hamlets.

Dusty yet regimental,
old dimple pints stand to attention beneath the bar.

Longing and begging,
this hostelry yearns for investment and a vibrant atmosphere.

Forlorn and depressed,
the only new life is the gathering pile of post in the foyer.

Silent and eerie,
“Last orders” was called so many years ago.




Looking at so many of your pictues, the poem really came to life. So thank you to the people who photographed it and to Martin who wrote the words above.
 
This is beautiful, I've always thought derelict buildings - especially ones which used to be filled with people enjoying themselves - are a great inspiration for any literature... I've just never bothered to pick up a pen!

This has inspired me - thanks for posting!
 
Whilst I thank for posting it,
The forum is not for lit,
I know its not tort,
But this aint a report
So for this: I fear the pit
 
Whilst I thank for posting it,
The forum is not for lit,
I know its not tort,
But this aint a report
So for this: I fear the pit

:(

It says up there ^^^^^

"General Stuff Chat about general topics. Please keep it derelict and abandoned places related!" so I thought/hoped it scraped in.

:(
 
Aww, leave it mods, we don't get em all the time and it's derelict related :p

Seriously though, lovely poem, certainly resonates having walked the floors there myself not too long ago. Cheers

~RR
 
Thanks Mr UrbanX Sir *doffs hat*

Rectory Rat, I noticed you had one of the dimple pint glasses mentioned in one of your photos :)
 
I did manage to save it a few times. Called the fire brigade twice and got two metal thieves arrested. Sadly I was not able to patrol it 24/7.
 
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